Revised Haiku Shapes

By Erika Goering,

  Filed under: KCAI, VisCom1
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I made my final shape more horizontal, to follow the look and feel of the other two.


  Comments: 1

  1. Erika, your last composition has changed a bit due to the animation stage, right? You seperated the “feet” from the “question”/text. This was a good move forward, but that also means the composition (as you show here) doesn’t work formally. So when displaying that last line (in its static form only) you’ll need to show the various stages.